The line graph compares statistics on the percentage of dwellers whose ages are between 65 and more in Japan, Sweden, and the United States over a period of 100 years from 1940.
It is clear that the proportion of the elderly group witnesses an upward trend in each certain country throughout the given period. However, it is predicted that Japan will be on a dramatic rise according to overall population figures.
In 1940, the figure for Americans aged 65 or over was responsible for the highest rate, at well under 10%. During the same period, around 8% of elderly people were from Sweden, which was nearly 3% higher than those from Japan. Whereas the rate of Japanese inhabitants and Americans, who were in the age range of 65 and over, saw a moderate increase, reached the same outgoings with approximately 15% over the following 50 years, the percentage of elderly citizens in Japan went down by a half, which occupied below 3%. Besides, there were no significant changes in the proportion of the USA elderly bracket from 1980 to 2020.
By 2040, Japan, with the lowest rate over the period shown, will experience the greatest overall increase. It is expected to be a sharp growth of over 15% in the proportion of Japanese people aged 65 and more since the 2030s, to just above 27%. Similarly, the rate of Swedish and US inhabitants in the age range of 65 to over will climb steadily, at 25% and 23% respectively.
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007 78
- The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012 73
- The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002 56
- The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption 78
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 92
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s over a period of 100 years from 1940. It is clear that the proportion of the e...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, similarly, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71084337349 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56917646945 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4374870838 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184832390874 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735971355101 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438954812009 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116397760198 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342262874618 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s over a period of 100 years from 1940. It is clear that the proportion of the e...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, similarly, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71084337349 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56917646945 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4374870838 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184832390874 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735971355101 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438954812009 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116397760198 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342262874618 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.