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visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country

Searching for past events and journeys that occurred in the country is one of the most important features in today's world. Visiting a museum has a relationship with culture and society. When foreign people come to our country the most places that they want to see are museums. A controversial question that is often regarding this issue is whether visiting museums is the best way to know about a country or whether there are other ways to get familiar with a new country. Some people possess that the former are agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that there are several ways to learn about a country.I Personally, content that this issue is multifaceted. I think some museums have huge historical evidence of our ancestors and visiting these places is not empty of advantages. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my point of view is in museums we can find the pattern of history. There are evidence of old people's lives and the information that historian gain are fruitful for us. It can help us to get familiar with native culture stuff like their clothes, their subsidence, their homing, etc. It is crucial for us especially when we are unfamiliar with a new country.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that museums are so entertaining places. We can spend a day entirely in them especially if we travel on tour. Thus I think it is important to have a good tour leader who has agreeable and precise information about museums. Some incorrect information can cause bad influences on people's minds. Consider my personal experience to make this point clear. three years ago, I traveled to a new country on tour and we decided to visit their museums. Our tour leader told us the native people used some hand gestures as welcoming to tourists like thumbs up or waving hands. That night, I used waving a hand at the old couple and they looked at me badly and told me they use this gesture as informal words and bad behavior. I apologized to them quickly and never used it again.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this statement that visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... relationship with culture and society. When foreign people come to our country the ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e several ways to learn about a country.I Personally, content that this issue is ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...n them especially if we travel on tour. Thus I think it is important to have a good ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Three
...al experience to make this point clear. three years ago, I traveled to a new country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, i think, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76441102757 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64572163423 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503759398496 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9879800534 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293932565174 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795811253891 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119827422714 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225062398559 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181810951517 0.0645574589148 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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