The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been. Before what do you think are the main causes of his difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?
In fact, there are total 54 friends nations from all of Vietnam, with a lot of nations like that takes a problem of an even distribution and causes in equality between reich and poor nation is now wider
Firstly, the difficulties from those places where they live. As you know that most of nations, including the nations, who leads in a more than city, or Ho Chi Minh City, most of another nation, almost live on mountains or hills, or even deep Valley, or somewhere far from the city with small and unknown provinces, it is a big problem for them. Ministry of education to dissenminate to them.
Secondly, because of those reason at the first, they had to adapt to the modern things. Normally, they usually live in their own nation, Village with old traditions and they don’t always update outside social news and they even don’t use social media.
Thirdly, because of far away locations, including agriculture, an animal husbandry, there aren’t any job to do except they have to go to the city to find jobs.
In conclusion, because of different environment, types of education, lifestyle makes the rich and poor nations make a big problem. We can solve it by facilitate for propagating, encourage people, and also have them to have a better life
- The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been Before what do you think are the main causes of his difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap 56
- The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been Before what do you think are the main causes of his difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the nations') or simply say ''most nations''.
Suggestion: most of the nations; most nations
...laces where they live. As you know that most of nations, including the nations, who leads in a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80733944954 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5972540257 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8715890104 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118488972427 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428300952461 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412640418463 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639911164642 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453976757899 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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