In the last 20 year there have been significant developments in the field of internet. However, future develoments in internet are likely to have more negative effects than positive
The last two decades the internet has been bringing us many benifits compared to negative affects since it has been invented. While the internet have brought many proceeds to the world, it can be argued that future interet will produce more negative influence than positive.
To begin, it is undeniable fact that the internet is the greatest invetition of the humankind. These kind of webs such as email , facebook , odnoklassniki , have made communication much simpler and faster. Futhermore th world wide web means that information on every conceivable subjects are available to us. For example, people can access news, medical news , weather news via internet. Even there are many online course which students can learn foreign language by using of internet. In general these improvements have made life easier and more convenient for large number of people who need to employ these webs especially in the field of medice , airport , bank system , business.
Nevertheless, the effect of the world wide web have not all been benificial. For instanse, many people feel that overusing of conversation web sites is destroying traditional forms of interaction like letter writting which was used by overwhelming people several years ago. Moreover face-to-face and phone conversation are being spoiled.
In addition , the large nubmer of the web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. There are also plenty of anxiously webs which are unsuitable for children. Unfortunatly, this kind of trial might even get worse in the our sebsequent life until more regulated systems are set up.
In short, many years ago people could not imagine that it is possible to communicate easily by sitting infront of computer with another person who is sitting the world's another place so for obvious reason the internet is important in person's lifestyle. Whereas we should not forget about the future because nobody can know what will happen in the future !!!
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Sentence: The last two decades the internet has been bringing us many benifits compared to negative affects since it has been invented.
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Sentence: To begin, it is undeniable fact that the internet is the greatest invetition of the humankind.
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Sentence: Futhermore th world wide web means that information on every conceivable subjects are available to us.
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Sentence: In general these improvements have made life easier and more convenient for large number of people who need to employ these webs especially in the field of medice , airport , bank system , business.
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Sentence: Nevertheless, the effect of the world wide web have not all been benificial.
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Sentence: For instanse, many people feel that overusing of conversation web sites is destroying traditional forms of interaction like letter writting which was used by overwhelming people several years ago.
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Sentence: Unfortunatly, this kind of trial might even get worse in the our sebsequent life until more regulated systems are set up.
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