A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Future of a country solemnly depends on its youth which comprises of students.whether their are from urban areas or rural, Change in education should not impede their progress due to change in location or other circumstances.hence I totally support the argument that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
if every where in a country curriculum will be same it will provide an equal opportunity to all of its students regardless of their ethnicity or location in which they live.moreover there may be cases where some students are from rural areas studing with in urban vicinity and if the above conditioned is not fulfilled there may arose a feeling of inferiority complex amongst rural students which will not be benificial for the country as well as for those students.
secondly if the curriculum will be same all over the country students won't have any problem in changing their school due to any reason such as transfer of thier parents to same other place etc.
what if the above condition do not hold true? curriculum change from region to region creates diversity in studies and it becomes difficult for teachers also to handel various programs and students of various regions who do not have any know how of their new syllabus . uptill college level students becomes mature enough to select their interest an field of study ,but during school age every students need a helping hand to support them in each step they take to pursue their carrear.
hence in conclusion it is rightfully said that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college as it creates unity at various levels such as students,teachers and foremost the country.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 65
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 47
Sentence: if every where in a country curriculum will be same it will provide an equal opportunity to all of its students regardless of their ethnicity or location in which they live. moreover there may be cases where some students are from rural areas studing with in urban vicinity and if the above conditioned is not fulfilled there may arose a feeling of inferiority complex amongst rural students which will not be benificial for the country as well as for those students.
Error: benificial Suggestion: beneficial
Error: studing Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: ethnicity Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: secondly if the curriculum will be same all over the country students won't have any problem in changing their school due to any reason such as transfer of thier parents to same other place etc.
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: what if the above condition do not hold true? curriculum change from region to region creates diversity in studies and it becomes difficult for teachers also to handel various programs and students of various regions who do not have any know how of their new syllabus. uptill college level students becomes mature enough to select their interest an field of study, but during school age every students need a helping hand to support them in each step they take to pursue their carrear.
Error: carrear Suggestion: career
Error: uptill Suggestion: untill
Error: handel Suggestion: handle
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Don't leave a blank space before punctuation marks.
Leave a blank space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1459 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 60.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.541 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.593 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5