TPO 30
The professor says that the reasons in the passage against burning mirror are all unconvincing.
To begin with, the first reason in the passage is that ancient Greeks were not technically advanced enough to devise such a large sheet of copper at that time because it should be made in a parabolic shape. The professor refutes this reason. She mentions that they could stick small pieces of copper together in order to form the parabolic shape and made a large sheet of copper as a burning mirror to use as a weapon.
Second, the passage states that it would take a long time to set Roman ships on fire with the burning mirror. The passage illustrates an example which shows they need time around 10 minutes for burning the ships. The professor rejects this point. She adds that 10 minutes was needed if the ships were made of wood while, the surface of the body of ships were covered by a sticky substance which could set on fire in seconds. The material was used for water resistant purpose.
Finally, the passage mentions flaming arrows as a common weapon to setting the Roman ships on fire. However, the professor opposes this point. She says that Roman soldiers were familiar with flaming arrows. In contrast, the burning mirror is a kind of surprising and magic way to attack them and it could be much more effective.
- Do you agree or disagree?In today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 70
- TPO 30 80
- TPO 28 80
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- TPO 26 80
10 minutes was needed
10 minutes were needed
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 234 250
No. of Characters: 1067 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.911 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.56 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.211 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.218 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4