Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past can help us better understand the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/what is your opinion?
The opponents of history argue that studying history is all worthless, unprofitable for us. In my opinion, theories regarding history may be accessible to us a lot to better understand the present.
It is understandable why many hold the belief that studying history is useless. First of all, history is an academic subject that requires learners to memorize a long list of names and dates. This for some people with bad memory or those who do not interested in learning history will make them feel time-consuming and boring. And a lot of students today with a huge amount of knowledge that needs to be learned at school, instead of focusing on history, they will choose major academic subjects that could help them on their exams. Moreover, having a full range of things, society is growing and people are often paying attention to prominent professions such as economics, science, marketing, etc, just a few people are interested in history. They think that history has become obsolete, no longer related to present-day problems.
However, studying history is a necessary thing to get a proper understanding of the present and the past. History helps people to increase their understanding of how the world operates, how humans evolved, about how to get to the fullness of things as it is. Besides, through the study of history, people can draw many lessons about life experiences from which they can make more informed decisions. Especially in the past, with historical events happening, there are many typical faces with great contributions, they can become the inspirational model for us. They inspire us with their moral qualities, dedication, and sacrifices in the construction and development of society to create a better future for humanity.
In short, history is very important to the present because it offers a lot of practical lessons. Thanks to history, people understand the present better from a historical perspective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
...he present. It is understandable why many hold the belief that studying history is use...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...f focusing on history, they will choose major academic subjects that could help them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1746031746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90147962705 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8451819544 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269523105899 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953419988259 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523133067148 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172930769394 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456385054017 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.