These day, young people are likely to postpone while doing something, which leads to their job progess has not completed on time.However, this problem can be solved by helpful methodes.
The main reason is there are many competition between a lot of student, which makes them suffer from this stress.Laterly, they might less interested in studying because they do not feel happy while go to school.As a result, in class, they just talk to their friend in stead of paying attention to this lesson.For example, in my class only smart student finding study is execting, the others might talk and sleep at class.Another reason that they do not balance between study and job.For example, some students feel tired because they work hard for a long time.As a result, they might get low score, which make them upsad.
I can suggest two possible solutions to this problem.Firstly, the pricipal should create more activities oudor to make sure that student feel relax when go to school.Not only will it make universities and colleges accessible for everyone, but it will also reduce the number of working students.Secondly, the pricipal can enourage student to go to school reguraly by giving some scholarship.What’s more, students don’t have to lear a living and can focus on their study.
In conclusion, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes students to work, but this problem can be solved by lowering the amount of financial expenses students have to meet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day, young people are likely to postpone wh...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...r job progess has not completed on time.However, this problem can be solved by helpful ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun competition seems to be countable; consider using: 'many competitions'.
Suggestion: many competitions
...thodes. The main reason is there are many competition between a lot of student, which makes t...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of students'.
Suggestion: a lot of students
...n is there are many competition between a lot of student, which makes them suffer from this stre...
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Suggestion: Laterly
...hich makes them suffer from this stress.Laterly, they might less interested in studying...
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Suggestion: As
...ey do not feel happy while go to school.As a result, in class, they just talk to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...n class, they just talk to their friend in stead of paying attention to this lesson.For exa...
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...tead of paying attention to this lesson.For example, in my class only smart student...
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...he others might talk and sleep at class.Another reason that they do not balance between...
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Suggestion: For
...ey do not balance between study and job.For example, some students feel tired becau...
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... because they work hard for a long time.As a result, they might get low score, whi...
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... two possible solutions to this problem.Firstly, the pricipal should create more activi...
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...at student feel relax when go to school.Not only will it make universities and coll...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...o reduce the number of working students.Secondly, the pricipal can enourage student to g...
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Suggestion: What
...ool reguraly by giving some scholarship.What’s more, students don’t have to lear a l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial expenses students have to meet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12757201646 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92731180968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.694399224 49.4020404114 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.5 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.7667163134 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120176243231 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835762588172 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543162887422 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835762588172 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543162887422 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 50.2224549098 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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