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In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “quackers”, which was unable to detect by sonar. The reading provides three theories about what might have created the odd sound. However, the professor counteracts by saying the author’s theories are still in debate and refuted each claim mentioned in the passage.

First theory suggested by the reading is that the strange noise was actually the call of male and female Ocra whales during a courtship ritual. On the other hand, the lecture opposes by saying that t...

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technology has not advent the submarine whose engine works silently and moves quickly.
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No. of Words: 311 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 311 250
No. of Characters: 1467 1200
No. of Different Words: 166 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.717 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.196 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.894 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4