The age, when most of the individuals become eligible for their drivers license in 18 the majority of nations. One some opined that it is for the card as it will help them to become independent, I along with its opposite to believers feel that it can be dextrous for the lives of individual. This FC, in the forthcoming paragraphs, will discuss both the views along with mine.
At the outset, 18 is the perfect age for driving a car or bike as that is the age when the teenager usually passes out of his high school and will have to commute for his tertiary education and work. To cite an example, a teenager juggles between his part-time job and college during which being able to travel via himself will not make him dependent on any of his guardian or parent. Does, the right time to get a driver license is believed to be 18.
On the other hand, is it safe to handover a car to a teenager? Certainly not, because of the fact that they get excited and can put their lives in danger. Car racing, for instance, is often performed by individuals in their early 20s resulting in accidents. Life of an individual can be ruined if God paralysed or harmed in this happenings. That is why, I feel mid 20s is the age, when license of driving should be provided as individual becomes a mature and will not engage himself in reckless driving and races.
To conclude, although for becoming independent, license should be rendered at the age of 18, for safety reasons and adults should be allowed to drive rather than a teenager.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ver a car to a teenager? Certainly not, because of the fact that they get excited and can put their live...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...be ruined if God paralysed or harmed in this happenings. That is why, I feel mid 20s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5168368397 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4830919496 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222100218246 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804738940419 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675639788025 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147709289369 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538053381654 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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