Old-age homes, a place where elderly individuals reside and are taken care by the caretakers, is gaining grounds in many nations. The cost of living in such places where in electricity, food, etcetera is included is a matter of debate as a who should pay for this. Some people hold the view that the authorities should take care of it. I; however reckoned that it should depend on the financial conditions of the family of an elderly. this essay, in the forthcoming paragraphs, will elucidate the reasons for my viewpoint.
At the outset, in case of economically disadvantaged families, government must bear the cost of living in such houses to make their life easier. For individuals who are working on minimum wages, it is hard to put food on the plates of their loved ones, let alone being for the living cost of the parents or grandparents. They have to work part time to make both ends meet, if asked to pay for old-age houses as well. Does, in such cases, it is better that authorities should come forward and help.
Apart from this, is it only the responsibility of government to look after the population in their 60s are above? Definitely not, as the rich can support such places in order to lessen the burden on which aims. Doctors, engineers, bureaucrats, to name but a few, for instance, who are well-off should be for their care. If such individuals render pecuniary aid, the money saved by the authorities which otherwise will be spent on the care homes, would be used on some crucial sectors like education, healthcare, etc. Hence, the ones with higher remuneration should be every month to such homes.
To conclude, although the onus of elderly is on the authorities for their comfortable lifestyle in case of the economically weaker sections, the affluent should provide monitory aid to the homes of elderly so that other sectors receive some finances as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82407407407 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71728892871 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9159293212 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288330749744 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091329829293 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058378000025 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163613203075 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071429653353 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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