In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
Following the advancement of humanity, the world has witnessed countless invention in various field such as science or technology. Undeniably, inventions are necessary as they serve a great purpose to make living easier and more convenient. Diving deeper into these innovations, this essay will particularly discuss about one of the most crucial equipment in the past century-the computer.
First and foremost, it is obvious that computer is a wonderful mean of education since it gives people remote accessibility to the internet without an effort, providing us with huge amount of knowledge. Moreover, these pieces of technology have also been well known for teaching in school as it offers students with a more intuitive perspective on the lesson. Not just that, computers are incredibly famous sources of entertainment amongst teenagers, for instance, surfing social media platforms or listening to music.
Furthermore, this invent acts as an indispensable tool in every single kind of work and is widely used in communication overseas. As a matter of fact, they connect people from all around the world which assist significantly in business matter. In addition, computer is the only type of tool that could help people to have better management, containing data and categorizing vital information. Clearly, not only can this invention increase the efficiency of productivity but it also keeps the business running smoothly by sorting things out in order.
In conclusion, due to the positive effects that computers bring to human’s daily life, it is safe to say that this piece of technology deserves to be the most reliable invention in the past hundred years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36501901141 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00225209073 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673003802281 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9586491878 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156029031805 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517794632245 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364798649768 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936796806218 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405538226116 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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