Sone people say that children nowadays have an easier life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it is often debated that children had a more challenging life in the past than now. childhood, the time from birth to 18 years of age, is the physical and mental development, to reach independence, and is filled with difficulty. most adults hope that each generation of children has an easier and more enjoyable life. The life of children before the turn of the millennium was easier in the sense of learning and traditions, but with stricter parenting, as where now, children have greater global pressure, but more relaxed parenting.
On the one hand, life in the 80s and 90s required children to understand their local languages, customs, and knowledge, and parents established harsh consequences when kids neglected to do this. youth were expected to attend school, complete their homework, and achieve scores that were over 80% and better than their peers, otherwise, they were not allowed to play with friends, or eat food and at times physically punished. For instance, in Vietnam, every child was pressured to learn vietnamese at the highest level by memorizing poetry and writing advanced narratives. clearly, this took much effort for many youths at that time.
In contrast, for the current generation, parents have become more empathetic and no longer punish children but rather support them with care and advice. this has made life for today's youngsters somewhat easier. However, globalization and the advancement of technology have created much greater demands on children's mental development than for any past generation. Nowadays, most children must learn not only their local knowledge but also international standards to be competitive and thrive in a world of eight billion people. it is true that vietnamese youngsters now not only need to learn vietnamese but they must also be fluent in English. In addition, they may need to put up with cyberbullying that never existed back in the 20th century. clearly, childhood today also has its own demands.
In conclusion, childhood a generation ago and now both require effort, the former in the sense of adult pressure the latter in the context of globalization. Indeed, becoming an independent adult requires just as much effort, if not more than in the past. it may be that the effort required during childhood is not dependent on the era but rather the context of each individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.140625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79407545333 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3793684875 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188476427127 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625334853225 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662499605409 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113479907811 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875377132132 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.