The diagram shows the changes to Station Street in 1960 and now.
The given map illustrates differences of the Street Station between in 1960 and now.
Overall, lots of changes have been made throughout the period. It is clear that numerous buildings are demolished, while some are brand-new at the present compared to 1960.
In the past, the Street Station included many shop. On the top, there were a row of store, such as a pharmacy, a butcher, a toy store, a book store, a bakery, a dvd rental store and a fish and chips shop, respectively from the left to the right. The station street is placed in the middle, between two sides of constructions. Finally, at the bottom was the railway station with a grocery and public telephones on the left, a dry cleaner’s on the right.
In the current Station Street, all seven stores are replaced by a parking area, a super market and a café. Those grocery and public telephones are disappear, instead, merge in to a hotel. Nevertheless, the other things, including station street, the railway station and the dry cleaner’s is remained the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shop seems to be countable; consider using: 'many shops'.
Suggestion: many shops
...n the past, the Street Station included many shop. On the top, there were a row of store,...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this grocery' or 'Those groceries'?
Suggestion: This grocery; Those groceries
...arking area, a super market and a café. Those grocery and public telephones are disappear, in...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...Those grocery and public telephones are disappear, instead, merge in to a hotel. Neverthe...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7294584058 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7406762977 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284014580442 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117296476136 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986123283157 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184353342887 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951736825622 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.