The bar chart show the number of visit to community website in first year and second years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features have relevant.
The bar chart give information about the percentage people use contact website from first year to second yers.
Overall, it is clear that people use website in the first years of September is lowest but in the second years in July is highest. However, we can see if we look at the specific figures.
Look at the number of visit to a community website. It can be seen that the overall of number use to community website in August is highest among twelve months and have number is 15,000 people. Meanwhile, this number is lowest in February and March, September and have number of turn is 1000 people with February and March, 2000 people with September. By contrast, number of visit community website in November and December have same number is 10,000. Ranked second in terms of the highest percentage after August is June and July have number is 12,000 and 13,0000.
Look at the number of visit to community website. The people use to contact website in second years is higher than first year. The rate of people visit to community website highest is June and July have number is 22,000 people and ten times higher than the first year. Meanwhile, have lowest number among 12 months is February and March have same number is 10,000. By contrast, ranked second in terms of highest percentage after June and July is November and December have same number is 17,000 people. So, it can be seen that community website become more popular in seconds with people.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-11-08 | Trần Ánh Vy | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2000'.
Suggestion: March 2000
...f turn is 1000 people with February and March, 2000 people with September. By contrast, num...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... visit to community website. The people use to contact website in second years is h...
^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
... higher than the first year. Meanwhile, have lowest number among 12 months is February and ...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...00. By contrast, ranked second in terms of highest percentage after June and July is Novem...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72156862745 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24896404875 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360784313725 0.547539520022 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7381605143 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357438613468 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159946107737 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857792587505 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255160284903 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588752565879 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.02 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.