Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school to develop their confidence.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures can you suggest?
It is believed that educating pupils to perform in front of the audience during school lessons in order to increase their self-esteem is necessary. I find this idea justifiable and there exist some additional ways to propose.
Adding extra lessons which help children to feel more confident while they are presenting is effevtive, since they can easily practise the theoretical methods among their intimates and peers without any reluctance and shame. Children do not need to afraid of being laughed or underestimated because of possessing the same level with their classmates. Moreover, pupils can strengthen acquired knowledge about giving speechs during the compulsory lessons in the curriculum. For example, tutors can give making presentations as a homework from biology or history, so this will be workable way to prepare themselves how to explain their notions among others.
Furthermore, parents may direct their offspring to extra courses which are organized by celebrities or well-known orators among youth. Because of wanting to be famous like them and feeling more lberty without any pressure of parents and teachers, kids may enhance their performing ability faster. In addition, there exist a number of videos going viral on social media. Not only school children, but also everybody who tries to learn performing skills, may download the videos and watch repeatedly to strengthen their oral capability without leaving their places. For instance, during the pandemic situation, online-study was the best option of learning in order not to be infected with the disease.
In conclusion, teaching learners to give presentments by school mentors is doable method, I think and attending additional classes, as well as acknowledging video lessons can aid them to be more confident.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ns among others. Furthermore, parents may direct their offspring to extra cour...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ut any pressure of parents and teachers, kids may enhance their performing abilit...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to perform'.
Suggestion: to perform
..., but also everybody who tries to learn performing skills, may download the videos and wat...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...edly to strengthen their oral capability without leaving their places. For insta...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...trengthen their oral capability without leaving their places. For instance, duri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47122302158 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83100838168 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6900791566 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19293663233 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656392982549 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370259662802 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113395750475 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043247110805 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... necessary. I find this idea justifiable and there exist some additional ways to ...
^^
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... give making presentations as a homework from biology or history, so this will be...
^^
Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or history, so this will be workable way to prepare themselves how to explain the...
^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns among others. Furthermore, parents may direct their offspring to extra cour...
^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut any pressure of parents and teachers, kids may enhance their performing abilit...
^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to perform'.
Suggestion: to perform
..., but also everybody who tries to learn performing skills, may download the videos and wat...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edly to strengthen their oral capability without leaving their places. For insta...
^^
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trengthen their oral capability without leaving their places. For instance, duri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47122302158 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83100838168 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6900791566 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19293663233 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656392982549 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370259662802 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113395750475 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043247110805 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.