For hundred of years, the debate over whether people can become a leader through learning is still fierce. Some may suggest that leadership is a talent and comes naturally and one can never find a away to be a leader through study. However, I hold this view differently. I firmly believe that nonone borns with leadership.
To begin with, as an old saying goes, "Man is the product of environment." Leadership can be considered as special personality and there are conutless cases which indicates that people could acquire leadership through learning and training. Nowadays, books that are related theory of success and how to become a leader dominate bestseller list. More and more business and military school provide people with a series of courses about leadership formation which includes organizing a group, leading subordinates to compete with others, and even taking part in real military simulations. These practice do help people to cultivate leadership. Moreover, take the famous WestPoint military school as an example. It educated numerous commanders and sent these excellent people into different battlefields. Their courage and accomplishments help WestPoint military school set a good reputation and prove outstadnging leader can be trained through learning.
Furthermore, there is no scientific evidenve that proves leadrship is a inherent and genetic character. Plenty of cases have comfired that; one of these is Abraham Lincoln, whose father did shoe shining in streets, but Lincoln has been considered as one of the most important president in the United States history. Besides, if leadership is a inherent quality, why those offspring of politicians rarely inherit the position from their parents. Accroding to a recent study condcuted by Harvard University, researchers devided people into two group and imparted theory of leadership into only one group. Consequently, they turned out that only people from educated group have aspirations and abilities to become a leader.
In a nutshell,it is undoubtedly that nonone was born with leadership for the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50769230769 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96500456509 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612307692308 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7012652143 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174711208866 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531554936744 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468667439081 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1120251643 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400686182506 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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