Hi I write only a story with some words that I learn today and I want to check it by a person. please, check it if you can.
I’m an employee in a factory. One day a popular person want to come to our here and my coworker want to approach to him but he neglect to them. Our buss go to say welcoming to him then they wait for the lawyer that they was client of him but he postponed . At the first time we don’t understand why they are whit each other but in the short time I detect thorough. Our buss and the popular man whit deceive scheme defraud a person that they sold a capsule instead of a massive box undoubtedly they denounce about this defect. Then they decide to escape from city to preserve themselves. After that torrent of letter come from low to our factory and they want to close it comprehensive. It is a unique happen that I’m not consent whit their decide.
Sentence: One day a popular person want to come to our here and my coworker want to approach to him but he neglect to them.
Description: The fragment person want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment our here and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace here with adjective
Description: The fragment coworker want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment he neglect to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace neglect with verb, past tense
Sentence: Our buss go to say welcoming to him then they wait for the lawyer that they was client of him but he postponed .
Description: The fragment buss go to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace go with verb, past tense
Sentence: Our buss and the popular man whit deceive scheme defraud a person that they sold a capsule instead of a massive box undoubtedly they denounce about this defect.
Description: The fragment scheme defraud a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace defraud with verb, past tense
Sentence: After that torrent of letter come from low to our factory and they want to close it comprehensive.
Description: The fragment it comprehensive . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace comprehensive with adverb
Sentence: It is a unique happen that I'm not consent whit their decide.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to unique and happen
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to their and decide
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 145 350
No. of Characters: 596 1500
No. of Different Words: 91 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.47 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.11 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.266 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 37 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.954 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.39 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5