Dear Sir,
My name is faith Micheal, I am writing this later concerning the environmental pollution in my street, 11B factory road London. I have lived in this area for a while now and this is the first time we are facing this type of environmental issues "pollution" and it is taking too long to fix.
The wastes buckets are usually dropped at the beginning and the end of the street sometimes in the middle for easy disposal of trash, but recently the buckets have not been steady on the streets and it is really affecting the environmental.
Normally, when these waste buckets are properly put in my street, people in the areas find it easy to dispose their waste properly, but when they don't find the bucket they dispose their waste inappropriately. This causes pollution and affects my health.
I suggest the waste bucket should always be in the street and in the right positions to enable people in the street have easy access to dispose their waste properly.
I will be grateful if you act fast about the situation.
Yours faithfully
Faith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, My name is faith Micheal, I am writing t...
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Message: You should probably use 'bucket'.
Suggestion: bucket
... taking too long to fix. The wastes buckets are usually dropped at the beginning an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, when these waste buckets are properly put in my street, people in the areas fi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88586956522 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83776329525 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6322310593 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1929200286 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092658275863 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379903993946 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110340678237 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288234928807 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.