Describe a festival or special event
New Year is one of the most special days in Vietnam because for many reasons. In Vietnam, this is a traditional day that we call in another name ‘Tet holiday'. The Tet holiday usually begins in January or February every year. Before the Tet holiday, we have to clean up the house and decorate by ourselves. In the countryside, a large number of families cook traditional foods such as Chung cake, jam, caramelized meat, etc. During the Tet holiday, all of the members of our large family will sum together and wish the best things to each other. After that, we can receive lucky money from our uncle or aunt. Clothes during the Tet holiday are a special we call ‘Ao dai'. These clothes are beautiful and colorful. In conclusion, the Tet holiday is the day when all of the members can sum and have a good time together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liday. The Tet holiday usually begins in January or February every year. Before t...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...orate by ourselves. In the countryside, a large number of families cook traditional foods such as...
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Line 1, column 450, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ized meat, etc. During the Tet holiday, all of the members of our large family will sum to...
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Line 1, column 761, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...lusion, the Tet holiday is the day when all of the members can sum and have a good time to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52348993289 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37044851663 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637583892617 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2355111355 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0371343034396 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176107308126 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352826466825 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371343034396 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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