New Year is the most interesting festival in Vietnam which attracts people to celebrate. It occurs in late January and lasts in early February. There are a large number of activities in which people partake are redecorating, and refurbishing their houses with these eye-catching blossoms during the time. What is more, some indigenous customs like lion dance and dragon dance are demonstrated on the stages with tons of viewers. Most families often make some traditional cuisines with a view to making the offers to their ancestors, and forefathers also. In addition, Vietnamese people also wear the '' Ao Dai'' in a bid to show their respect to Vietnam's culture. I feel that that event is more and more exciting, containing some conventional values on account of washing away the hardship and failure. And also, it is the time for family reunions after a hard year of working and studying.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Jakson02122004
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and lasts in early February. There are a large number of activities in which people partake are ...
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Line 1, column 550, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ers to their ancestors, and forefathers also. In addition, Vietnamese people also we...
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Line 1, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddition, Vietnamese people also wear the Ao Dai in a bid to show their respect to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, i feel, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77290579972 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3505881125 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0474701680493 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195429906814 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341821383271 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474701680493 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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