some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the host country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
it is true that there are conflicting views about the benefits of hosting international sports events. While some argue that such events are advantageous for the host nation, I agree with those who believe that they are a waste of money that should be better spent.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reason why some advocate of hosting international sports. Firstly, organizing sports events may promote health through a broad public interest in these events. New records may be set and a sports spirit is fostered, leading to an increase in the number of youngsters taking up sports and emulating their national heroes. Secondly, hosting international sports games would accelerate economic growth. These events attract a lot of sports fans from all over the world, which could help the host country develop hospitality and tourism. Qatar, for example, has had opportunities for introducing its culture, and customs as well as a lot of special foods for foreigners when being the host country of WC 2022.
On the other hand, I support the argument that too much value is placed on sports. Firstly, such international events are simply an opportunity to make money for hotels, restaurants, and businesses involved in sports merchandising. The vast majority of local people experience no improvement in their standard of living. Secondly, if the gov in the host nation provides funding for these events, then it must curb public spending on hospitals, schools, and a welfare state to help the poor. Besides, the money is used for upgrading infrastructure for sports events which lasts for 4-5 months.
In conclusion, only a few benefit when a country hosts an international sports event, while the life of most citizens seems to be unchanged.
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- some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the host country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 67
- some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the host country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'few benefits'.
Suggestion: few benefits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81296292487 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0938677346 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347865912149 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115925377684 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551620671479 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220414973871 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222040136929 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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