Practice 26: It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some even propose that more and more students in primary degree ought to educate how to cultivate all kinds of crops and adopt some wild animals. From my own perspective, these educational programs would bring several betterments apropos of children’s behaviour as well as our environment
On the one hand, the downsides of this phenomenon could coin from a wide range of compelling reasons. Indisputably, because the children’s perception could be yet to develop in a well-function. In some circumstances, those would be at liberty to use the sharp farming instruments without the administration from their parents. By the same token, as some of animals are able to spread many innate diseases for children’s mental health. Hence short of the management of parents, those with unfinished developments apropos of health are prone to devastate by these kinds of illness
On the other hand, I would contend that the aforementioned detrimental influences are peripheral to its propitious leverage. First and foremost, the educational conjunction among theories and implementations are wholly distinctive in which the farming activities in the school would assist many students to comprehensively raise their own ability and nurturing their love with all kinds of vegetables. Besides that with the ever-increasing problems of mental disease in many children. Therefore, mothering animals would render many students more gregarious to not only their classmate but absolutely their family. For example,. the amount of mental illness in the age of 8-12 went into a steep decline in recent years because the facilitation made by educational organisation in animal adopting projects that have more children fraught with interests
In conclusion despite some of all the given counterarguments, i am convinced that this growing trend has multiple favourable implications for individuals and childrens as a whole
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Some even propose that more and more students in primary degree...
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...n’s behaviour as well as our environment On the one hand, the downsides of this p...
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
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...om their parents. By the same token, as some of animals are able to spread many innate diseases...
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... diseases for children’s mental health. Hence short of the management of parents, tho...
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...e to devastate by these kinds of illness On the other hand, I would contend that ...
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...for individuals and childrens as a whole
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54794520548 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26504773105 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.456336189 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824400432482 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321595427428 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291598837041 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538469091712 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00918842369845 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some even propose that more and more students in primary degree...
^^
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n’s behaviour as well as our environment On the one hand, the downsides of this p...
^^^
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...om their parents. By the same token, as some of animals are able to spread many innate diseases...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... diseases for children’s mental health. Hence short of the management of parents, tho...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to devastate by these kinds of illness On the other hand, I would contend that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed detrimental influences are peripheral to its propitious leverage. First and fo...
^^
Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...but absolutely their family. For example,. the amount of mental illness in the age...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... absolutely their family. For example,. the amount of mental illness in the age of ...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...some of all the given counterarguments, i am convinced that this growing trend h...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome of all the given counterarguments, i am convinced that this growing trend has...
^^
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for individuals and childrens as a whole
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54794520548 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26504773105 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.456336189 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824400432482 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321595427428 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291598837041 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538469091712 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00918842369845 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.