Write about the following topic
In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is true that there are huge amounts of wasted food in many countries than it used to and there are many reason made people do that way. While this is a serious problem, it can be solve by some of my point below.
There are some reason that people tent to overtake food more than their demand. Greed is a human trait, even if we do not mean to, sometimes, we still want more to get ourselves advantages. Moreover, the abundant of resources make people became waste and unrespect what we got. People alway think about themself and rarely think to the poor and hunger, although they are needer food than the other. After using food, most of dishes are not cleaned and sometime there are still enough food to make a meal for the others. Consequence of this issue is while the food had been through away, the hunger still hungry. This may cause many society's vices such as thieve, robbery or some else.
The answer is that we must be stricter and that food waste must carry a penalty. If guests order too much food or leave too much food on their plates, a restaurant may double the price they charge them. Another alternative is for people to continue their practice of making a brief list of the foods or items they actually need before going shopping. As a result, less food would need to be wasted since customers would have more time to plan ahead and make informed decisions about what food to buy.
In conclusion, the two main causes of the enormous amount of food wasted nowadays are food abundance and people awareness about food waste. Fortunately, there are a number of practical options to deal with this problem, such as punish people who throw away food and creating habit by making shopping lists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...countries than it used to and there are many reason made people do that way. While this is ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the dishes') or simply say ''most dishes''.
Suggestion: most of the dishes; most dishes
... food than the other. After using food, most of dishes are not cleaned and sometime there are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: THROUGH_AWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throw'?
Suggestion: throw
...f this issue is while the food had been through away, the hunger still hungry. This may...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 309.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54692556634 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15950984882 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7430477404 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407188283099 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140675641322 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865688716911 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271634446481 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032336229184 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.