In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
People in some countries are suffering from obesity result in the negative effect to their health and fitness. In this essay, I will discuss two main issues which is eating unhealthily and lack of exercise and what we can actually do to prevent this problematic state.
First of all, people tend to it more junk food than heathy one. Certainly, we just eating fast food due to the convenient and time saving of those meal or they just have a good flavor for our taste. For example, I used to eat hamburgers or sandwiches for breakfast because it quicker than make a full meal at home or sometime junk food like Takoyaki can ceased my appetite faster. However, eating those food can let us suffer from many types of disease such as heart attack, high blood pressure and cancer. So, the solution for this issue is that we just cut out junk food and eating more greens. We have to make sure that our meal provides enough nutrition and calories. As a result, we will be heathier and prevent the fatness of our body.
Second problem is we are not getting enough physical activities. Because of how time consuming the workout could be in some people mindset combine with how technology affect us these days, physical training is not that many people care about anymore. For instance, in the past, people used to go outside and did outdoor activities such as soccer, kiting and playing with their family while in the modern days, thanks to the smartphone, we don’t need outside activities for entertainment. The lacking of exercise could make us lose our endurance, weaken our muscle and bone which is also lead to hearth disease, high blood pressure, high blood cholesterol and obesity. Nonetheless, I can prove that workout doesn’t time consuming because the doctor state that an adult just needs around two hours a week for exercise and because of that we just need fifteen minutes of exercise each day. When we tired from working or studying, we just need to stand up and spend fifteen minutes of stretching our muscle already make us heathier. With that statement we should remember to workout more for our own fitness and health.
In a nutshell, the average weight of people is increasing and decreasing health because of the unhealthy food and the deficient of workout. We can sovle all of this issues just by have a heathier diet and doing exercise more. With this solution, i expecting the society will not suffer from disease and obesity anymore.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 67
- some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 67
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this meal' or 'those meals'?
Suggestion: this meal; those meals
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...sed my appetite faster. However, eating those food can let us suffer from many types of di...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
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Suggestion: need
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75878220141 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41295546916 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512880562061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.214134001 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.947368421 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112365085192 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419542328554 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581217284687 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925384270835 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545567141212 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.