Internet advantages and disadvantages.
Some people hold the view that there are many good points and bad points of the Internet. From my point of view, I completely agree with this idea, but the positives of the Internet outweigh its negatives.
On the one hand, Internet has greatly benefited people in many ways. In the first place, social networking make it easier to keep in contact with our family and our friends. For instance, it helps us give relatives news quickly. It also helps us organize meetings, parties, or social events for large groups of people more easily. Furthermore, using Internet is the quickest way for people to get a lot of useful information and knowledge which is needed for our studies. In fact, we can search engines like Google or Yahoo which is an endless supply of info and knowledge, also we can ask questions on any topics and have the answers in a second.
On the other hand, Internet has many drawbacks. In the first place, people who surf and play games on Internet can be addicted. For example, spend too much time online make people become distracted, they skip their daily routines and they do not pay attention to their studies so in this situation, Internet affect people’s lives negatively. In addition, use Internet can be dangerous because computer hackers hack into users’ account and steal personal information to identity theft. For instance, websites with inappropriate content make children and young users upset and confused so children being more aggressive and promote self-harm.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the internet has greatly benefited people in different ways. Although it has some drawbacks, it can be managed efficiently if we use the Internet correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00704225352 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61792637109 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8322304697 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148353291206 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063753784589 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496662842161 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108018367622 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031292138376 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.