Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I definitely think that it is important to work quickly and I know there are several possibilities of mistakes but we can fix them with enough practice and hard work and I have two reasons for that.
First of all, the world is progressing very rapidly, to continue in this world we also have to change very quickly as world the change. Now the word demands workers who work fast without any mistakes and also pay them very high. Instead of slow working people who have fewer chances to get a job and to get a high salary because of their slow working habit.
Second of all, there are some jobs who need workers who work quickly and on their instruction as they want . according to them workers who have slow working habit could not fit in their frame.So, the people who work well ,do not make mistake in their work but unfortunately have slow speed in work cant survive there. I remember when my big brother who is typewriter try to get job when he was graduate. that time he get trouble to get a job because of his intermediate typing speed . after spending two months on his speed he got success.
So to sum up it is more important to be quick in work rather than slow and correct. If you got successful in becoming a quick worker then you will become an ideal worker for this world and there are more probability of getting promotion in work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.408 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33785061059 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8482449569 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231267732066 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918289497228 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738015072461 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161857307621 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446096156744 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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