As more and more people are taking alternative medicines and treatments by themselves, my concern, it is not a wise idea for them if they do not visit their usual doctor. I will address my opinions below.
Firstly, I admit that if people got sick just because of a small illness, it is not necessary to visit a doctor and they can try some alternative medicines. When people got a fever or cold, they can go to CVS or other pharmaceutical stores to buy some pills and get a cure themselves. Even sometimes you can treat yourself by relaxing and drinking more water. I think this is the case when people got covid-19 nowadays since this virus can not be removed from the earth like we can not overcome the cold or fever forever.
Secondly, however, people can not always try to take alternative medicines or treatments without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, at the beginning of its outbreak in the year 2020, this high-contagious disease is not as simple as the common flu since it kills people. In another word, people got contact can not get cured all by themselves. They need the right treatments by the doctors and equipment like ECMO which help them to breathe. Moreover, the medicine to cure people who got covid-19 like plaxivod as well as the vaccine like Moderna was not developed immediately. Thus people have to turn to the doctor for help. Moreover, there are lots of complicated illnesses with some trivial symptoms at the beginning like cancer. If you just treat it as a cold and buy some pills at the drugstore, the consequences will be adverse and dangerous.
Thirdly, it is true we can cure ourselves with some medicines or treatments, but how can we judge whether we need to see our usual doctor? It is not only a question I will answer but a living
philosophy I will address. The most important thing for us is to live a healthy life instead of always preparing to take some pills or see the doctor, doing to the gym and eating healthy are significant for our bodies. Then, we need to take a body check at a time to make sure our body is healthy from the inside to the outside. At last, it is the judgment we need to take, in short, if you can not get better with your own treatment, do not hesitate and just go to see the doctor as quickly as possible, since your body is asking for professional help instead of your own experience.
In general, it is not advisable for people to try alternative medicines or treatments by themselves without seeing their usual doctor. For some illnesses we can not get well all by ourselves, we need the right person, our doctor, to help us get cured.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ents without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, at the beginning of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, even so, i think, in general, in short, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54621848739 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59482613306 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1110546782 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.047619048 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259441498644 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841768153849 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867775050931 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148674844518 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499995613897 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ents without seeing their usual doctor. Still the covid-19 case, at the beginning of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, even so, i think, in general, in short, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54621848739 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59482613306 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1110546782 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.047619048 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259441498644 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841768153849 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867775050931 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148674844518 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499995613897 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.