You should spend about 20 minutes and write at least 150 words.You do not need to write any addresses, begin your letter as follows:Dear..............A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won'

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You should spend about 20 minutes and write at least 150 words.
You do not need to write any addresses, begin your letter as follows:
Dear..............

A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won't until the evening.

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening.

Dear cousin Reene,

I am glad to hear the news of your arrival in my town. I think you will be here on Wednesday morning but i should tell you that i have the biology class in the early morning so, i won't be home untill evening. I am sorry Reene for this inconvenience, you have to take a taxi from the railway station to my home. I will give my house keys to Mrs.kevin you know who lives next to my house. I will her to give those keys to you and don't worry i will be home at 5pm then we wll celebrate new year together. I shall bring some crackers and candles with me and if you like we can also go out for dinner. We will have fun while watching movie with some of my friends at the house and you will be going to enjoy the coming evening so, i am waiting for your arrival.

your lovely,
Gireesha

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Sentence: I think you will be here on Wednesday morning but i should tell you that i have the biology class in the early morning so, i won't be home untill evening.
Error: untill Suggestion: until

Sentence: I will her to give those keys to you and don't worry i will be home at 5pm then we wll celebrate new year together.
Error: wll Suggestion: will

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No. of Words: 159 200
Number of Paragraphs: 1 3

Need more words and better organized.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 9
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 593 900
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 3.7
Average Word Length: 3.73 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.977 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 23 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 19 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.943 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.525 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.383 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 3