Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my compain about the basic safety protection of your supermarket. I am one of your registered consumers with my account ID is 000000.
I ususally go to shopping in your market in every two weeks since I moved here three years ago. Previously, I found it was covenient for me to buy daily food and stuff here. While last week, I went to buy some fruits for my children while I fell down on the wet floor where there was no warning sign near the fruit and vagetable zone. Hurt on the bottom,fortunately, there was nothing serious on my body.
As a loyal consumer of your supermarket, I would like to offer my suggestion to the service flaws in this place. It would be much better if there was a warning sign on the wet floor. Instead, if not me, the children for instance, the consequence on that day may be worse.
I truly like this supermarket due to the distance and suply meet my demands.I hope you can make it better in the future.
Thank you,
Sincerely,
Tony
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sumers with my account ID is 000000. I ususally go to shopping in your market ...
^
Line 6, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fortunately
...t and vagetable zone. Hurt on the bottom,fortunately, there was nothing serious on my body. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... the distance and suply meet my demands.I hope you can make it better in the futu...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45744680851 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65333310206 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9299281094 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147281394032 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573435112867 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064170372879 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931430314495 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507264361721 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sumers with my account ID is 000000. I ususally go to shopping in your market ...
^
Line 6, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fortunately
...t and vagetable zone. Hurt on the bottom,fortunately, there was nothing serious on my body. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... the distance and suply meet my demands.I hope you can make it better in the futu...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45744680851 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65333310206 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9299281094 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147281394032 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573435112867 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064170372879 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931430314495 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507264361721 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.