Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well,
I am writing this email regarding a piece of luggage I left accidentally on a train. I just called the train station where I got off. The operator advised me to follow up with you by sending an email.
Let me tell more specific details that may help in finding my staff. My trip was scheduled for 9 AM from Toronto to Oshawa at Union station. My ticket number was 564131 if you need to check more information. As soon as I got in and found my seat, I put my luggage, a red, carry-on size luggage with an Iran flag sign on top, under the seat. However, unfortunately, I forgot to take it at my destination because I had fallen asleep and I had to get out in a hurry before the train leave the station.
I would appreciate it if you help me with this and let me know if I need to take any further action. As I checked the website, the next scheduled trip for the train, is at 9 AM, tomorrow. It would be great if someone checks under the seat before the train's departure time.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Your Faithfully,
Masoud Safaei
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trains'' or 'train's'?
Suggestion: trains'; train's
...omeone checks under the seat before the trains departure time. I look forward to hear...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19811320755 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42900255245 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1632122497 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24955943927 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877759240728 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707526774685 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143193136088 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635367243895 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trains'' or 'train's'?
Suggestion: trains'; train's
...omeone checks under the seat before the trains departure time. I look forward to hear...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19811320755 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42900255245 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1632122497 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24955943927 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877759240728 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707526774685 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143193136088 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635367243895 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.