The mind of a human being is a place where thoughts flow in and out. There are people who have the idea that you should plan for the future while others think it is best to stay focused on the present. In this essay I will discuss how planning can be helpful in outlining the steps needed for achievements ahead, and why focusing on the present will only guarantee the success for today.
On one hand, when you plan for what is coming Infront, the blueprint needed for its achievement is available and success is guaranteed. To illustrate, the 2022 World Cup was a remarkable feat for Qatar because plans were put in place to ensure victory. In addition, a house cannot be built unless there is a plan for that structure, which has been created earlier. Clearly, if you make plans for the future, then the success of tomorrow is ensured.
The only way the success of today can be achieved is by zooming in on the present. There is no way today is assured where we fail to make arrangements for its victory. The Holy Bible, for instance, says that nobody should worry about tomorrow but face the day before us due to its significance. Governments of countries also have yearly budgets that only points to the present year. With everything said above, it is right to say that today's achievements will depend on the present plan.
In this essay I have discussed how planning can be helpful in outlining the steps needed for achievements ahead, and why focusing on the present will only guarantee the success for today. This is my idea on the topic until I come your way next time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56842105263 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44594374681 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6482782759 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261793148356 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932378240817 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720247003323 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175048590927 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552671044434 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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