The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today
Information regarding how an Australian beachfront location has transformed from 1950 to the present is revealed in the diagram.
Overall, this area has experienced relatively extensive transformations, the most noticeable of which is the addition of a new car park, the expansion of the transport infrastructure and the erection of recreational facilities
In the upper part of the area, a cityward road which began at a car park has been expanded southward, encircling the area and leading to the lighthouse. While a new car park has been established in the place that was formerly occupied by a roadside playground, dining tables and a pavilion situated along the road have remained intact.
In the lower part of the area, to the west, a two-story spacious restaurant and a facility exclusively catering surfers have been built adjacent to a 25-m pool which has been doubled in length. To the east, an additional surf club has been erected between the unchanged facilities including a pre-existing 25-m pool and the lighthouse.
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 84
- Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 84
- The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future 73
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction between many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25149700599 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16601725269 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6807504332 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.4 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896467596281 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462945401713 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442779089033 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582218261477 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031692861129 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.