The diagram below shows the carbon cycle.
The given diagram illustrates the circulation of carbon in nature.
The cycle comprises various stages, beginning with the photosynthesis process and ending with the evaporation of vegetation.
In the first stage, carbon exist under solid and liquid which specifically are oil and coal or fossil fuels.Following this,fossil fuels will be took away from the ground though mining,or extraction.After that,the fossil fuels will do its responsibility through power supply operating the machine,such as factories need them to produce goods,vehicles need them operating and in the energy industry,fossil fuels are the main role in electricity production.At the same stage,the waste product of carbon exists in the form of carbon dioxide through burning of coal and oil,which seriously harmful to the environment if there's plenty of it in the air,the ozone layer puncturing and that lead to ultraviolet rays hitting the Earth directly,then it causes diseases to all species,including human,according to many studies have shown.Fortunately,carbon dioxide is mostly absorbed by vegetation,they need them to photosynthesize and create nutrients for plants.The process of absorbing carbon dioxide of plants occur day by day without differences until plants become old and die as a natural principle.Vegetation will decay and the product of that process will start a new fossil fuels production.Once completed,a new cycle of carbon is born.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ically are oil and coal or fossil fuels.Following this,fossil fuels will be took away fro...
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... and coal or fossil fuels.Following this,fossil fuels will be took away from the ground...
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... the ground though mining,or extraction.After that,the fossil fuels will do its respo...
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...the main role in electricity production.At the same stage,the waste product of car...
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... dioxide through burning of coal and oil,which seriously harmful to the environment if...
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...seriously harmful to the environment if theres plenty of it in the air,the ozone layer...
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...onment if theres plenty of it in the air,the ozone layer puncturing and that lead to...
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...ill start a new fossil fuels production.Once completed,a new cycle of carbon is born...
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...w fossil fuels production.Once completed,a new cycle of carbon is born.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76886792453 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79030200438 2.65546596893 143% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 22.4926829268 311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 537.451599888 43.030603864 1249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 407.666666667 112.824112599 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6666666667 22.9334400587 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1565100278 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133060328213 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679292540446 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133060328213 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679292540446 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 13.2329268293 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 61.2550243902 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 6.51609756098 312% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 10.3012195122 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.37 11.4140731707 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.02 8.06136585366 149% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.4329268293 192% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.9970731707 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.