Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Lately every single person have ability to make some information by social media. Ultimately, every reader must be careful to understand the real circumstances. I fully agree with this nation because many writer many people deliberately accompany false opinions.
First of all, the main reason why i believe that every news on the internet must be selected because What happens in the real world does not necessarily correspond to the scattered. In other words, the lie is most popular than the true issue. Moreover, a lot of untruth information exposed by website makes public figure scared to share the best moment from their own life. Consequently, the amount of people which can be influenced is decreasing that situation became because teenagers and all ages was not trusted with all announcement. For instance, Putra siregar is founder of Ps store, he gave the false issue about the specific item he sell and sometimes he always conducts giveaway with the interesting gift like money, hp and another things, while he arrested on charges of manipulation of merchandise.
Secondly, another reason is because account owner from some link or website requires a biggest popularity. That's why we often look on social media about the fake case with the excessive advice even the true story will be a big problem. For example, Fuji and thoriq was a couple since 2022, they are always together and being best couple in some appreciation on TV show, however suddenly appear dispatch that their relationship was broken the rumor always exist every years until now they was confirmed if they are not couple again.
To conclude, i strongly believe that every issues on the internet must be filter first because have many gaffe in there and that's why we must be a smart person to choosed the pinpoint history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun writer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many writers'.
Suggestion: many writers
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sells'.
Suggestion: sells
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...wner from some link or website requires a biggest popularity. Thats why we often ...
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Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, another thing, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01661129568 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58852387373 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9282049454 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0793706090893 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282697602025 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276082460552 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484607067212 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018629175454 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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