The pictures illustrate the transformation of the Shalton village over the period of 100 years, starting from 1910.
It is clear that this village had the radical changes such as the replacement the large house for the small road which was add from the London road.
The position of the school remained stable, which still located in the South West. Next to it, it was parking area and supermarket instead of a bushur in 1910. In 1910, a bushur stood between a house and a school, by contrast, this house was replaced by the bank so the bank stood in the left of the parking area.
Not only this, the post office was same the school because it still lay in the north of the map. In addition, instead the post office just stood alone in London road, in the right of this building, a lots of houses appeared. At the center of the map, the building which stood in the middle and the tree area was replaced by the house area which surrounded the road.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d of 100 years, starting from 1910. It is clear that this village had the ra...
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...arge house for the small road which was add from the London road. The positio...
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... which was add from the London road. The position of the school remained stab...
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...od in the left of the parking area. Not only this, the post office was same ...
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...on road, in the right of this building, a lots of houses appeared. At the center of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4375 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22459689681 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517045454545 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9214859024 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160609663524 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741215149795 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808154911239 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123434544261 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865099019487 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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