Opinions are widely divergent on whether people should solely pay ing attention to their own nations''s news or being conscious of global news is of greater significance. discuss both view and give your opinion
Opinions are widely divergent on whether people should solely pay ing attention to their own nations''s news or being conscious of global news is of greater significance. In this answer, I will shed light on the rationales behind these two perspectives before showing why I favor the former.
On the one hand, there is no denying that reading and watching news in their country could offer various tremendous benefits. To begin with, notice of the news in the local area will act as a method to know new laws need to be followed. As a result, they can know what behavior they need to avoid to violate the laws. Furthermore, paying attention to the news in their own country will help citizens to know more information in their area which might impact their daily life. For instance, if there is a traffic accident in the area, people would know about that quickly via online news and try to avoid the street on which the accident has happened.
On the other hand, there is a compelling reason as to why I am convinced to focus on international news. One reason is that international news may help for their future plans. This is because the news will provide more information about the change of weather, money prices in other countries for them. Therefore, they can adjust their plan in time to prevent unnecessary losses. For example, now there is a war between Ukraine and Russia, so when people know that news, they can cancel the plan to travel to two nations in time.
In conclusion, although there is sufficient evidence to infer that focus on news in the local area, I would contend that it is more important to be aware of international news.
- Opinions are widely divergent on whether people should solely pay ing attention to their own nations s news or being conscious of global news is of greater significance discuss both view and give your opinion 61
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid violating'.
Suggestion: avoid violating
...hey can know what behavior they need to avoid to violate the laws. Furthermore, paying attention...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68835616438 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53282772203 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.719816985 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324973236829 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119281073897 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175607667676 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218680930495 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14746428599 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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