The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations

The given bar chart indicates the investment contribution in terms of four different sectors in five organizations (A, B, C, D, and E).

Overall, building is the most critical investment for all five organizations. Notably, organization B spends more money on its investment, while organizations D and E spend the least.

Looking at the chart in greater detail, organization B allocates about € 1.9 billion to staff training, which is significantly higher than organization D (€ 0.7 billion) and organization E (€ 0.9 billion). Although companies D and E invest the most in building (€ 1 billion each), it is € 0.4 billion less than organization B. Machinery is allocated the lowest amount of money by organization B (€ 0.9 billion), whereas organizations D and E spend the least on research (at €0.6 and €0.7 billion respectively).

Turning to the others, around € 1.7 billion is invested in the building of organization A, in comparison with about € 1 billion in organization C. In contrast, organization C invests the highest amount of its funds in machinery and research, at almost €1.3 billion each, while organization A spends the least on machinery with only €0.9 billion.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€1'.
Suggestion: €1
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Suggestion: €0
...ignificantly higher than organization D € 0.7 billion and organization E € 0.9 bill...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€0'.
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...tion D € 0.7 billion and organization E € 0.9 billion. Although companies D and E i...
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...ies D and E invest the most in building € 1 billion each, it is € 0.4 billion less ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€0'.
Suggestion: €0
...ost in building € 1 billion each, it is € 0.4 billion less than organization B. Mac...
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...owest amount of money by organization B € 0.9 billion, whereas organizations D and ...
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...rganization A, in comparison with about € 1 billion in organization C. In contrast,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15897435897 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31519324412 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1019769965 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275858964725 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150653154101 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468309434229 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200458701228 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376728485133 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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