Under 19: 34-12
19-24: 62-38
25-30: 35-50-38
30-34: 12-45
34-39: 8-15-30
Over 40: 3-1-5
The given bar chart displays proportion of the first-time mothers in Australia from 1966 to 2006.
Overall, all six age brackets experienced upward trend, except for those aged under 30. Additionally, the 30-34 age group accounted for the highest proportion of women giving birth to their first child in the final year.
Looking the chart for greater detail, it can be observed that in 1966, the majority of the 19-24-year-old women had their first child, accounting for about 62%, compared to 34% of those aged under 19. Over the next 40 years, these figures for the 19-to-24 age group and under 19 dropped dramatically, hitting about 28% and 12% respectively. By contrast, people aged over 40 made up the lowest figures shown on the chart, rising from only 3% to 5% over the same period.
In terms of the remaining age brackets, there were 35% of Australian women gave birth to their first child in 1966, which was significantly higher than those aged 30-34 and 34-39, at 12% and 8% respectively. Over the next 20 years, the figure for the 25-30 age group hit the highest point of 50% before dropping suddenly to 38% in the final year. Meanwhile, the 30-34 and 34-39 age groups experienced enormous growth in the number of the first-time mothers, reaching at 45% and 30% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Under 19: 34-12 19-24: 62-38 25-30: 35-50-38 30-34: 12-45 34-39...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98723404255 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5680983271 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6494214417 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231717563718 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114983914783 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833993416261 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185137657548 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219758346201 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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