Art, music, and drama should be a part of every child's basic education.Do you agree or not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Art, music, and drama should be a part of every child's basic education.

Do you agree or not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I strongly believe that art, music, and drama should be part of every child's basic education because it both influences the individual and the society in a positive way.

Literacy and numeracy are perceived to be basic skills that any person should learn in childhood as part of school education. However, artistic literacy also should be emphasized during childhood; since young minds are malleable and have such wonderful plasticity in this period that allow for a child absorbing new skills faster and more efficiently than adults.

Art, music, drama, and other similar skills can be used as...

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Sentence: Art, music, drama, and other similar skills can be used as an adjunctive language to express the feelings and thoughts that cannot be easily outpoured by regular words.
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