The line graph shows TV news viewing figures in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the number of audiences watching four different channels in 2010.
Overall, it is obvious that while the 1 pm news witnessed a period of stability, the programme “6 pm” fluctuated throughout the year. In addition, the 9 pm and 11 pm news both saw a fluctuation, however, these tv channels changed opposite.
Looking at the line graph to give more details, the figure for the 6 pm news was the highest point with 4.9 million, then it declined slightly to 1 million in March. After that it continued vacillating until hit a low of roughly 3.2 million. Moreover, The channel “9:30 pm” had a negligible rise in TV news viewing figures from 3.1 million to 3.9 million in May before it bottomed out with nearly 1 million in August. “11pm”, the latest programme introduced in May, started with the smallest audience and then it escalated to 4 million in August.
In terms of the period time after August, the 6 pm news grew to 4 million then witnessed a drop from 4 million to 3.2 million; nevertheless, it still was on the highest position in the chart. Additionally, the figure for viewers watching 9:30 pm increased to 3 million and became the second preferer programme in 2010. After reaching a peak in August, the number of 11 pm’s watchers fell sharply to 1 million. During the time frame, 1 pm’s audiences experienced a period of stagnation.
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| 2024-11-22 | hahoaan | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 78 | view |
| 2024-11-11 | hahoaan | 84 | view |
| 2024-11-10 | Giang Tran | 78 | view |
| 2024-11-10 | Giang Tran | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eclined slightly to 1 million in March. After that it continued vacillating until hit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, still, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79253112033 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7974807085 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535269709544 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2428084311 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109242410006 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486485012742 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439600890146 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817114528519 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289965616906 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.