Owning to the fact that these days people work hard to purchase more things, it has made our lives more conducive generally. It is unfortunate, however, that many values of tradition have been misplaced along the way to such materialism. In other words, I partially agree and disagree that traditional values have been lost because people work hard to live a comfortable life.
On the one hand, individuals work tirelessly, so they can be able to live comfortably. This will enable people be in control of their lives, and it will keep them more focused since they will have financial stability. Africans, for instance, relocate to American countries to work hard, and live the best parts of their lives. Clearly, when someone is a hard worker, he or she will live a comfortable life, and they would be able to have whatever they desire.
On the other hand, the values of traditions are not being accounted for because nowadays people can live a stress-free life when they work hard on some kind of jobs. Ladies, to exemplify, from different tribes work as strippers in strip clubs, and earn a reasonable amount of money, but loose their traditional values in the process. Thus, cultural values are lost due to the kind of jobs which people engage in to live a comfortable lifestyle.
To recapitulate, individuals work around the clock to ensure they live a satisfactory life, but, in some cases, values of their cultures are lost in the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... earn a reasonable amount of money, but loose their traditional values in the process...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, kind of, in other words, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67168059679 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8672508591 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31451788049 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132472866759 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908272648355 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20602164264 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143394268614 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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