Taking part in extracurricular activities such as sports and music is becoming as important as academic study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of extracurricular activities for students?
Due to the social development, education seems to be concerned about by government. School nowadays not only teach academic learning for students but also give them some extracurricular activities. Debating to this problem some individuals say that it is necessary measure for enhance pupil’s ability, but others argue that it may waste a lot of time and make students become worse at their study. The pros and cons of this tissue will be taken in consideration in this essay.
First of all, when students have chance to join in optional activities, they can reduce stress easily. Nowadays, learner is coped with many pressures. This can be made from the community, their family or study. Therefore, by participate in some sports, music class pupil can temporary forget all stress and immerse in their own world. Moreover, extracurricular activities can help them to improve their soft skill such as communication skill, listening skill, critical thinking and so on which is practiced by meeting new people, trying somethings new. This mean that students can gain some experience which is known to be strong support for them in the future. From that point, pupil will have environment to improve fully their ability and become more creative, active, resourceful, which may support effectively for their occupation in the future.
However, this problem still have some negative aspect. On account of teaching innovation, some people use advantage of it to skip study academic knowledge from school. This mean that pupil believe that when they participate in some optional activities they need not learn seriously and then omit many classes or do not finish their homework. Explanation for this tissue is that some individuals still have idle awareness and deny totally benefit form study academic syllabus.
In conclusion, I believe that the positive side from this problem outweigh the negative one. Therefore, to develop fully capability of students, school need to have some suitable resolution to balance elective and compulsory subjects. From this point, pupil may have solid foundation to find better job opportunity in the future.
- Taking part in extracurricular activities such as sports and music is becoming as important as academic study What are the advantages and disadvantages of extracurricular activities for students 78
- Taking part in extracurricular activities such as sports and music is becoming as important as academic study What are the advantages and disadvantages of extracurricular activities for students 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7508790668 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5935523844 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13949673949 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409250235246 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476867399751 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813953897715 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472698079302 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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