The given line graph illustrates the average amount of CO2 emitted per person in four different countries namely: the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal for the period of 40 years, commencing from 1967. Overall, the average CO2 emissions released in Italy and Portugal showed steady and significant rises throughout the period, while the figures for the UK and Sweden experienced downward trends. Despite these, the average greenhouse emitted in Portugal was always the lowest and it remained the highest in the UK. In 1967, an Italian and a Portugalian emitted an average of over 4 and 1 metric tonnes CO2, respectively. For the next 10 years, the amount of CO2 in Italy experienced a sharp increase, exceeding over 6 metric tonnes in 1977. From 1997 to 1997, this figure grew gradually and slightly by approximately 1 metric tonne and remained at under 8 metric tonnes until the end of the period. In the meantime, the amount of CO2 released by a Portugalian experienced a dramatic rise throughout a period of 30 years and stood at around 5.5 metric tonnes in 1997, and then it almost remained unchanged in the last 10 years. In terms of the UK and Sweden, stood at nearly 11 metric tonnes, the amount of CO2 released by the British was the highest in 1967. It was followed by Sweden with fewer for 2 metric tonnes. This figure for the UK showed a gradual decline of 2 metric tonnes throughout the period and continued to remain the most CO2 emissions country among the listed. In contrast, the figure for Sweden experienced a sharp surge to reach nearly 11 metric tonnes in 1977, and then decreased substantially in the remaining period and together with Portugal were the least amount of CO2 countries in the end of the period.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1410, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...metric tonnes throughout the period and continued to remain the most CO2 emissions country among th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64209302553 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443333333333 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8962959204 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145644178127 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722569133759 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646267668914 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145644178127 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1410, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...metric tonnes throughout the period and continued to remain the most CO2 emissions country among th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64209302553 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443333333333 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8962959204 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145644178127 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722569133759 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646267668914 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145644178127 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.