Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies.And many people think that art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology.Do you agree or disagree?
In our integrated society, music and art are regarded as a necessary factor that surpass cultural and generational barriers. moreover, individuals worldwide acknowledge that this form still deserves recognition in the world of modernization at present. From a general perspective, this essay aims to analyze the plausibility of this hypothesis.
On the one hand, the opponents of music and art might ignite an argument that there are several ways to plummet a particular national culture. For instance, a statistic conducted by Cambridge University points out that 3D singers are dramatically getting attention from the general public in recent years. To be more specific, the rise of this trend might mingle up the proportion and quality in the showbiz field. moreover, AI now can create a picture by demand that is extremely sophisticated. this action just takes a few seconds to be accomplished, consequently, the artists express anxiety about this trend and exceedingly reject it.
However, every coin has two sides. this essay finds it more convincing that music and art are still the indispensable seasoning for our mental health. Basically, this form of entertainment can impact spiritual life by conveying emotions and massages. For instance, at the recently opened pre-auction exhibition “Artcurial”, one of the most noticed works actually comes from an unidentified author. Thus, art and music can bring individuals from diverse place togethẻ by creating a shared sensation that outbreak language and cultural barriers.
moreover, music and art are also an excellent way to promote the formation and emergence of creative behavior. The enjoyment of painting and melody requires creativity and imagination in order to completely appreciate it. For example, children approach music in the early years and then become well-known musicians such as Mozart, Beethoven,Bach,...
To sum up, art and music are powerful unifying forces that emerge in every part of the world. Indeed, technology can support artists to finish their works in certain situations. Eventually, this essay partly agrees with the sentiment that up-to-date technology moderately affects this entertainment sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69760479042 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12144523337 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6136713206 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.157894737 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177109232062 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539620912477 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602955602609 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104353468676 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318833128015 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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