Nowadays many people need things such as services, tasks, and information to be done immediately. They prefer it this way, so they do not waste the time they can use in achieving other things. However, in my opinion, I believe it is a positive development, so I will throw more light in the paragraphs below.
There are individuals who want things to be done on the spot, so they can achieve more tasks without having to waste time on one. In other words, when you get things done quickly, it means you value time, and want to utilize every bit of it that you come across. Bank clients, for instance want cash transfered immediately to their recipients. Clearly, if tasks, informations, and services are carried out instantly, then it will encourage good time management.
Furthermore, it is indeed advantageous whenever informations are passed fast. The reason is that the results will be punctual, and this will benefit people and society. For example, a child that calls the ambulance because her mother needs medical attention will be glad if they arrive almost immediately, and this will save her mum too. Thus, the development is a positive one as long as it has to do with informations being attended to instantaneously.
To conclude, individual people want things done quickly, so they can utilize the time they have daily, and it is a positive development because it will benefit the world if we handled matters faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82681603978 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.541842581 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284540216684 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992120264788 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063137719345 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16794740204 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448169792385 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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