Today, more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think it’s a negative or positive development.
There’s an increasing number of youngsters choosing to postpone their marriage until their 30s. Yet, this phenomenon has raised public debate as to whether its overall impact has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that late marriage would bring benefits to individuals as well as society.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that psychological development always lags behind physical growth. In this case, some young adults may not get virtually matured even if they have reached the lawful age line. More often the case, it’s when they have started their career or even stepped into society for a couple of years that they are able to shoulder their responsibility. In other words, early marriage means irresponsible or not fully prepared to become parents.
More importantly, though, delaying marriage enables more people to pursue their academic achievement. In earlier times, one of the most significant factors for people to make up a family in their 20s is the lack of education, particularly higher education. Now, however, it is not uncommon for an average student to receive advanced education since the accomplishment of compulsory education. As a result, the national literacy level has been increased greatly, which is conducive to social development.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm the position that it’s appropriate to walk into marriage in one’s thirties for the sake of an individual family and the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...his phenomenon has raised public debate as to whether its overall impact has been positive or...
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Suggestion:
...ich is conducive to social development. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm the pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3153526971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91203544176 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7948836219 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169034304943 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533089915739 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497713726409 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886617858837 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185044328966 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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