It is becoming a norm for people to stay away from the jobs that they do not find enjoyable. A number of people are of the opinion that it is more conducive to work in a fulfilling job instead of an unfulfilling one. This essay will discuss the above mentioned trend, and also give reasons as to the extent I agree with.
These days employees tend to look for jobs that they like and is favourable for them. This can be attributed to the following reasons. Firstly, if you are in a job that you love it will be much easier to improve yourself, in addition it will also aid in attaining your set goals. These will be made possible provided that the individual loves the job he or she is doing, thus increasing positive work output.
Also if you are in a work environment that you are comfortable with and enjoy, it will benefit the employee as regards his career growth, while also aiding in better work delivery because you can only function properly in a friendly and approving environment. For example, if a individual has always loved music and gets to work in a recording company, it will be very smooth transition in his career growth. Moreover, the his or her work delivery will be almost certainly very good because he or she already loves the organisation they work with.
To conclude this essay, in my opinion it is much better to be in a job that you love and is conducive which in turn gives you room to grow than to be in an unfulfilled job.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, as regards, as to, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46096654275 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52145476631 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4074942594 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265460245794 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103421774769 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573760343738 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174723131597 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494661650379 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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