Choosing a job and keeping it or changing jobs frequently depends on the choice of each person. From my point of view, switching jobs may give young people more opportunities, and staying in the same job can help them move up their career ladder.
On the one hand, young people who stay in a job for a long time have better job prospects, including promotion opportunities and salary increases. For example, when a company decides who to promote or dismiss, both dedication and experience can be considered.
In addition, there are many benefits that come with long-term employment for young people, like vacation time, annual bonuses, and sick leave. Besides, long-term employment helps people build a network of dependable friends and coworkers.
In conclusion, although job-hopping may provide a chance to experience various workplaces, staying in a job for a long time can help people to improve their job prospects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88194378849 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3987933594 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254223248703 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12553557458 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805974703606 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155839913561 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761260341058 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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