Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays many people use written languuage in a informal and more convinienced way. This development have their own bennefit and drawback appropriate with each person. The following essay will analyse boths advantage and disadvantage of this statement more clearly.
On the one hand, nowadays using language in a less formal and more relaxed way is appropriate with the youngs generation. informal language will help people more easy for discussing the emotion and felling with their friends to increase the cohesion, closer and understand each other. Furthermore, less formal languge help the conversation and communication more interested, thrilling and entertain. It also can change the boring stories to be more funny and attractive. For instance, teenagers can use the informal word for telling to their friends an addictive story which make the conservation between them more interest and more happpy. In additon, children who use informal language will be more creative because they are the creater of the news informal works.
On the other hand, less formal language are still exist some drawback on some other aspect. If people are depend too much on informal works, it will make our language more terrble, distortion and deformity and also it will make some people understand wrong meaning of the conservation. Moreover, using too much informal words or do not appropriate in situation will lets the communication loss its meaning and nature. For example, youngs people use words in the relax way on the meeting will make everyone at that conservation fell despised. In additon, if people usually use that words, the sociaty will tear away, stigma and take a distence away form them. In the mental of sociaty people who use informal language are unconscious, uncultured and lack of education.
To conclude, people can use less formal language and more relax way but this habit have to use in appropriate situation for taking a respect of everbody in the sociaty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antage of this statement more clearly. On the one hand, nowadays using language...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Informal
...appropriate with the youngs generation. informal language will help people more easy for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e creater of the news informal works. On the other hand, less formal language ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...er hand, less formal language are still exist some drawback on some other aspect. If ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'let'
Suggestion: let
...or do not appropriate in situation will lets the communication loss its meaning and ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous, uncultured and lack of education. To conclude, people can use less formal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21383647799 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73339006097 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1739575554 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398148561164 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142797405599 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989847190188 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29610679149 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086586174856 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.